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My actions- I can’t control With myself- I’m at war Involuntarily- I do things Spiders- I eat off the floor

My own urine- I can taste The voices start to overtake My life is such a waste I can’t stop- My body quakes

In the night- I awake Upon my chest- The weight of the sea Hearing things- I can’t mistake Unable to speak to make my plea

Genuflections- I perform My own body- I deform Banging my head off the wall This here- Is my downfall

The Virgin Mary comes to me, As I wander a field of green She asks me to suffer on, So the world will learn when I am gone

Stigmata- I receive Watching my hands, as they bleed Upon my forehead- There are cuts Through my pores- I sweat blood

Touched by God, I agree to carry on When my struggle ends, Humanity will know the price of sin © Copyright

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Answer #1

why is the narrator tasting his/her own urine??

Answer #2

She’s “possessed”. The narrator is Anneliese Michel, the person The Exorcism of Emily Rose was based off of. If you look her up online this whole poem will make sense to you. :)

Answer #3

It seems like to author is crazy for tsting his/her urine and eating spiders..but it is sort of funny.haha

Answer #4

Well, thankyou, I think.

Answer #5

Pure Awesomeness

Answer #6

It seems like to author is crazy for tsting his/her urine and eating spiders..but it is sort of funny.haha

Answer #7

:D!

Answer #8

It’s scary :S But really really really REALLY good :)

Answer #9

Thankyou, buddy!

Answer #10

Sounds like someone abused during childhood that has come to hate themselves and has been demonically possessed and gone insane through their own evil deeds and self hate. That person that needs the light of GOD to heal them but they refuse it because they are also addicted to their own self pity and perversions and ultimately hate themselves. That person should love themselves and accept healing and love and renounce evil.

Answer #11

It’s extremely eerie, and quite sad.

Answer #12

sounds like great lyrics for metal!

Answer #13

Way off, but nice try.