Some bits and pieces for a poem, opinions?

Its a work in progress here are some bits and pieces for a poem: Yes true love is the answer But it requires a lot of math You always need directions to find the path

[heres another]

Searching for a prayer with my good eye closed

[yet another]

Loves a dish best served cold

[last one I swear]

This love addictions killin me Rage and anger fillin me

[told you its all a work in progress]

Answer #1

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