These are some song lyrics I've been workin on for a rock song , I woul like some opinions please .
Sitting on my back all the time ,
Visiting all the towns low lifes,
They owe me some money ,
Now my butts on the line ,
Somethin will be chopped off,
If you dont decide to pay up,
Whos with me , you with me?
And how you spending your time,
Clean up with no more stuff,
This time spent will be rough,
Please help me , forgive me,
& prison not the place for me ,
Ya its a little cryptic , but deliberate , I was hopeing people could take there own meaning from it , but also I know what I was saying .
Sorry. I don't get it. I like where you're going with it, maybe try rewording it.