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These are some song lyrics I've been workin on for a rock song , I woul like some opinions please .

Sitting on my back all the time ,
Visiting all the towns low lifes,
They owe me some money ,
Now my butts on the line ,
Somethin will be chopped off,
If you dont decide to pay up,
Whos with me , you with me?
And how you spending your time,

Clean up with no more stuff,
This time spent will be rough,
Please help me , forgive me,
& prison not the place for me ,