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Its nothing.

Nothin more to say, nothin more to do. Nothin more, not even if I love you. If I could, I’d have the moon at your heel. For no one could love you as I do, still.

So much you meant, so much I thought I did. I wish for anything else, for I beat… For you this heart, you broke. In my despair. Even if a lie, couldn’t you seem to care.

In you I hoped my dreaded past would heal. But I was just another heart to steal. My love so true to you, a grieve I take. How I wish you weren’t my loved mistake.

<ps- its some oneelses’ idea just played around with it. :) > from http://www.funadvice.com/q/help_me_put_this_into_a_poem

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Answer #1

That is so cute…I love it

Answer #2

I wish I was that good

Answer #3

it’s pretty good..

Answer #4

Thanks a lot. :)

Answer #5

Thats A nice poem =]

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