What do you think of my song?

Me and 1 of my close friends had and fight a few hours ago and I wrote this song in the last 1/2 hour. Please tell me if you think its any good thanks. ~You…I thought you were my friend. I thought you would know when enough is enough. But nooo I see I was wrong and im not that strong… Cause when you said you couldn’t, you wouldnt, tell me no matter what I say…it hurt. I want to know why you are trying to keep this from me…I know you can tell it hurts. But nothing is going to help with whats going to happen next. You know I need to know who it is, the one who likes him, the one I love. Its all because of that damn promise you made to who ever it is. Cause…when you said you couldnt, you wouldnt, tell me no matter what I say…it hurt. But what I really want to know is, why you are trying to keep this from me… I know you can telll it hurts. But nothing is going to help with what happens next. My mind starts to clear of all this hate. But then it stops, it all comes right back. Want to make it all better, want to stop the hurt. Feels like im drownding, feels like nothings going to work out. The only thing I hear is your words echoing in my mind. I’d do anything to make it all go away. Cause…when you said you couldnt, you wouldnt, tell me no matter what I say it hurt. I want to know why you are trying to keep this from me…I know you can tell it hurts. But nothing is going to help with what happens next. Nothing…nothing…nooo nooothing…I thought you were my friend, maybe…just maybe… im just wrong.