What do youu think of this poeem?

Im done with you I got to be Because of the way you treat me

Say im wothless? Ill survive Say im nothing? Dont matter I wont cry

Because im done I want nothing more No more tears will hit the floor

Take a look at me now Its the last chance youll get Because im movin on Without any regret

I guess you can tell what happened..

Answer #1

I think its good except for the “my tears wont hit the floor” bit

Answer #2

I like it its awesome!!!:)

Answer #3

“no more tears will hit the floor” <33 Beautiful! (: I love it, Good job.

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