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Help me put this into a poem

car bumper 2 Asked by katie_ere 4 months ago, 5 answers.

Theres nothing more I can sayy
there nothing more I can do.
you just don't want me.
but I love you..
So what do I do?
after all these year
Noone gonna love you as much as I do
I would of brought you the moon with all the money I had.
You was...

worth more than any other in this world.
you could of never got another me..
I cant beleive youve done this to me
uve broken my heart once again..
and yet I still love you.
Im in so much pain
why can tyou just act like you care.
atleast I could of regain to love another.
my past isnt good.
I thought you'd was the only one who could put it all right
but who was I kidding,
just just another player too..
just like all the rest
I don't even know why im stil here loving you.
after al the hurt uve put me threw..
I guess this is what uve called true love.
but it isnt healthy love.

Shark Atack Answered by funadvice on Jul 17, 2009, 04:48PM
53902 answers

Yeah thats what I was thinking.

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summer :] Answered by megster on Jul 17, 2009, 04:30PM
182 answers

Seems to me like it already is in a poem form.

-Megan

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kjj Answered by emotionalxoxomcr on Jul 18, 2009, 12:14PM
535 answers

It is already and good job by the way.

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Shark Atack Answered by funadvice on Jul 19, 2009, 06:47AM
53902 answers

4 Verses, 5 lines each. Or mould it into a series of sonnets, old-fashioned and cool.

:) Answered by b0b0 on Aug 14, 2009, 12:01PM
32 answers

Nothin more to say, nothin more to do.
Nothin more, not even if I love you.
If I could, I'd have the moon at your heel.
For no one could love you as I do, still.

So much you meant, so much I thought I did.
I wish for anything else, for I beat...
For you this heart, you broke. In my despair.
Even if a lie, couldn't you seem to care.

In you I hoped my dreaded past would heal.
But I was just another heart to steal.
My love so true to you, a grieve I take.
How I wish you weren't my loved mistake.

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