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A child abuse poem I wrote.. What do yeh think??
I lay on the floor, staring at my door. Overwhelmed with fear, I wondered what’s next.
I heard the footsteps, closer and closer it was. The door banged open. I crawled weakly away.
A belt in your hand, I screamed in pain. You threw me against the wall I crumpled to the floor.
You screamed and yell, I’m living in a hell. I cried out in fright. It rings out through the night.
Years passes by, I’m a all grown woman now. The beast is old and weak. I lay by his side as he took his last breath.
I stood in the centre of world I heard the cries of the others. Will you save their soul or will you just leave it be.
AMAZING!!!
holy christmas sexy christel no one can beat that poem winnner!
its a good story. good poem, but why dont you try rhyming more? it would make your good poem into a great one… keep it your own though! dont change the story line!
omg thats great!!
Omg your poem was excellent…as I was reading it, could actually visualise your story telling, well done :)
o my gosh. that is amazing and you are so good.bravo
It’s good, I like it.
don’t know why you wrote it, but it’s great! :)
BRAVO BRAVO,Simply awesome,I want to write this as a song for sure!
really good poem x
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