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What: I wrote a poem and was wondering what you think of it?
A poem that I randomly came up with. tell me what you think please!
A Destroyer
A heart is a delicate thing. It can only be torn to pieces and broken so many times, it can only be repaired temporarily, for once a tear occurs it never goes away.
One day the pain will come back, when you least expect it a leak will burst open. It will leave a scar that no one can erase. It will bring with it the memories of hurt and lose.
If broken too many times, it may never to be the same. It may not be capable of feeling. It may shut out the world.
A heart that is bursting at the seams, where it was sowed together by a needle and thread, where it explodes and disappears, by a simple being, everything can change.
The world can go dark, the light blows out, and a person dies on the inside.
Thanks :)
that is amazing :) it really captures a feeling of hurt… in one word: awesome
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