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What should I write in this essay so that I can get into their school for junior year?

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So there's this private, boarding school (with no uniforms) and I really wanna go for a semester or a year at least.

This is the question: What promise would you make to SEC, to yourself, and to your community if you were to become an SEC student?

(SEC is the school I'm applying for in acronym form) I know I have to write it myself but I've tried my best to describe how I'm respectful and respsonsible and how I promise to do my best but I feel like it needs to be way longer. I need to "elaborate" on the things I already said.

What else can I say?