what do you think of my poem "Fading Beauty"?

When the wind blows beauty fades Thats what happened to you, you should have stayed I miss you bay I need you here To help me through this gruling nightmare

I know you’re gone and that wont change But you should call sometime to easy the pain Sometimes I feel like you forgot my name I miss you girl, you need to come home to stay

Answer #1

I think Abby is absolutely wrong, that was a very beautiful poem. Most of it stayed in rhythm and flowed with the words. Very good!

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