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What do you think of these two poems? They are both very different, but I want opinions, please and thanks.
Mr. Perfect
I'll call you Mr. Perfect You're in my favourite class I see you in the halls and blush every time you pass And when you smile my problems fade because boy, for you the world I'd trade Mr. Perfect you're on my mind Every second, all the time Mr. Perfect this isn't a game I just wish you felt the same
Tears
The tears are streaming down her face For this love, she must now embrace He doesn't know, he has no clue And now not knowing what to do She takes the blade and pushes down Pulls across until blood is found Then takes the pills, swallows them whole For now this life she must extol The tears still streaming down her face For now it's death, there's no retrace
I think you need to talk to someone thats depressing
that was awesome!
