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ok free verse poem tell me what you think

this is very different from my usual poetry and its a free verse with more subtle meaning to it…do you like it?

Scatters of colors across the sky I feel the warmth of the sun, You are the sun

Setting with each night I look forward to your rise You are my sun

Stretching across the horizon And lighting up the ocean You are the sun, and I am the ocean

Weaving soft textures And shades of every color Your beauty is obvious

Staying calm and grand Above all the earth The others are the world And you are the sun

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Answer #1

I like it its ver very descriptive

Answer #2

this one is amazing! I love how the words flow so naturally!

Answer #3

dude! this isn’t the first time I’ve had to tell you your writing is amazing! I love it! I might do what peachykeenlin is gonna do! xD

Answer #4

that is more than fine haha I do that with other peoples writting haha

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