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My Poem. Please Comment On It.

‘Just Save Me.’

I love you, I hate you!

Its nothing but waste. oh, why should I care?

Its my body, its my life, I dont need you, food. Please help me through this.

Never touching it again, guilt only follows. Just one more bite.

Can’t think straight, dizzy and weak. Holding me back is drawing me closer.

Fat and ugly, miserable and incomplete, If I pretend I’m OK, will these feelings go?

Its all my fault. I’ve done this to myself.

85 pounds is where I want to be. Another two weeks of agony.

Then will I be happy? Will I be complete?

I’m ready to give in now. Just please stop messing with my mind. Just please.. Save me.

Poem about my eating disorder. I know it isnt great, I just was haivng the worst day EVER today. and I wrote a poem. I got out my emotions, and tbh I dont want them to be good. Just understandable with no hidden twists. Thats my style of writing poems. Any ED sufferers here.. this is for you. Comment? Xo

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Answer #1

I love reading poems, that is a very good one, one that has so much emotion poured out & thats what makes it so great,

I’m really sorry you are going through this Ed & I will be praying 4 u, I hope you get some help with it!

Answer #2

going through the same thing.. I’m disgusted with myself. I’m finally slim but suddenly this disorder took over. I’m scared to death about being fat again.. I’ll lose everything I got after the waightloss.. My boyfriend, my friends, my happiness. And after overeating for a weekend I starve myself, desperat to be thin again but only lasts a day or two and I find myself eating again. I wish I could make it stop. To be honest I’d rather be anorexic. And I’ll probably end up being that, if I find a way to stop this overeating. If only I was capable of bulimia. But of course nothing can make me throw up, discusting pictures, toothbrushes down my throat, no matter what I have no gag reflex… I’m so tired of all this

Answer #3

I think it is very good… shows the inner strugle… which is what the readers really want to know, the struggles or trials your going through… good job… as for eating disorder keep your head up and you will make it some days will be worst than others but ifyou keep facing foward and move even that one step a day you will never fully get over the struggle but it will prove to be much easier with time… so good luck!!

Answer #4

hahaha…your just stressed out…eating is the best way to recover…

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