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Chewing gum and paper bags wherever I go Someday, gunna take it slow Patience comes to the pretty Concentration comes to them too sometimes you drop dead half way through but only that luck, goes to you
It was allright - you could definatly build off of that. Just keep brainstorming and use this as a rough draft and I think you could come up with something great.
its quite good, maybe you should go into more detail, or use better vocabulary ? (: apart from that its good :) x
not my type ov topic but it was ok
it sucks sorry but it does.
it was great
