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See the color of rain, feel the sting of pain.

See the color of Fire, know the passions of a liar.

See the color of wind, try to beleive that hearts never bend.

See the color of earth, express the solidity of worth.

See the color of my eyes, imagine all the tears I have cried.

See the color of my face, and look beyond the barriers of race.

See the color of heart, and beleive that I never wanted us to be apart.

See the color of my love, and see the departing wings of a dove.