I wrote a poem...what do you think?

its good and really fluid it could be a song

I really like your poem it sounds great!!!

Wow. It’s amazing. I’m sure, me included, can relate to this at some point in their lives :) good job x

That is intense… it is very good although I hope that isnt how you really feel!

that was awsome and well written!!!

Thought that was excellent :)

this is good it is really well written nice work :]

wow. thanks guys.I didn’t think it was that good cause I just wrote it about howi feel but thanks. And thank you ml31093 for telling me my mistakes! haha I didn’t even notice thanks :) itssupposed to be any ‘er do well but everytime I typed it it came up any’er do well haha I don’t know why

whoa… that was really amazing!

• its supposed to be and e ‘ e are but I can’t type it as a full word cause it keeps changing it on me

*ugh screw it is isn’t working hahah its not the word that shows up hahah

thats amazing. you should pursue poetry as a career.

Wow…this is REALLY good. kind of chilling how deep and raw the pain is. I hope this isn’t what you really feel… There are a few gramatical errors like “my head I start to lye” that should be LIE, and no hyphen in rerun, and this phrase confuses me; “All is any’er-do-well” (please reply with an explination)… Hope I helped, please reply.