Brand new poem!!!

I was always god in the devil’s situation. I was always the innocent soul Who always offered to take the blame. And no matter how innocent I was, I always felt completely ashamed. I can’t believe that ice can catch on fire. I was a good man, I was a liar. I had a theory for quite some time. The trees are meant to grow to heaven So we can climb to the top. But instead we cut them all down, So we can build out small pieces of hell.

Answer #1

SO DEEP! you may be surprised but some people (me and my five friends) feel the same. to me, this describes how you feel and how you look at your place in this world. I rate it a 10!

Answer #2

wOW… that was soo good!! I congratulate u!

xoxo

belle

Answer #3

wow another good poem!!!

Answer #4

love it of course!! I can definitely relate to this. So deep and touching. Great job :)

Answer #5

Really great and deep as offspringfan08 said!

Love it!

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