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I just wrote so give me some pointers!
Rain Drips into the gutters onto the streets Rain is everywhere Falling it drips down the windowpane and flows into the lane flowing through the streets flooding my mind part of nature part of me
TA-DA!!! What do you think?
Not amazing. But definately good. You should make it rhyme more.
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Its not supposed to rhyme I'm not a rhyming person
Eh, then in that case, nevermind. Good job.
loveee it