My new poem-Alone

Alone Always alone, Always around, Always in a crowd, But still alone. Keeping to the darkness, the shadows, Keeping to myself making sure that darkness Making sure that darkness shadows my never ending search For the light, Always hearing voices that aren’t real, Making my search seem impossible, Making it harder to return, Making it seem like I’ll never return Tell me, what do you think?

Answer #1

I love it! your goood! keep writing I’ll be reading.lol

Answer #2

sounds like it would be a good spoken word part in a song nice :)

Answer #3

i love it… hit my core for sure. nice job.

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