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Who like my "Lucky" poem?
Im not the best poem guy so it may not be perfect..and I put it in a paragraph style…oh well..=D
~~You ever wonder if god is only looking over you? As if you have everything you ever want, while thanking him while looking in the sky's deep blue? Perhaps its true for maybe all of us. Walking in the running streets feeling no fear knowing you'll never get hit by a small car or bus. "THAT my friend is plain luck",people say. Hearing those words from unknown people in pubilc every passing day. Luck is a chance of good fortune. Those who dont believe that are unhappy will always in side them have a sad beauiful tune. A melody that they hear to themselves that will oneday end. In hope that they hit the lottery for every money they spend. They ones who did are truely blessed. As Jusus came to them and put some of they suffering at last to rest. But living in luxary isn't always the best. As you still have a inner tune and other matters to address. But remember one important thing, living is the main luck power. And always cry to those who die in 9/11's Twin Towers.~~
I agree with thex13thxchild it doesnt really sound like a poem but its a really good short essay.
I thought it was wonderful, and that you’re really talented. I love how it adresses the difference between being lucky and being blessed, a lot of people still dont get that.
I loved it and I’m sorry for being a mean to u, I was wondering if we could be friends again please dre please and if you could tell me what I did wrong I will fix that… but I loved the poem
can’t say it sounds like a poem at all I think it’s great short essay
gasp its beutiful!!
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