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a real best friend

There are times when I just want to quit. I was lost in this world and you came inside of it. You told me everything would be okay. You were always there to wipe my tears away. In your arms I was safe and far from harm. You said you loved me and I could tell from the start. You kept me close at all times. You told me everything except for the lies. You made me feel special and that’s what I liked. You were an angel from heaven sent into my life. I always wished for someone like you. For once I stepped into the lucky shoes. Now you’re gone and I miss you so. There will never be anyone like you, today or tomorrow. Although you were made up in my head. You will always be my real best friend.

By: britne vinson

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Answer #1

That was great, descriptive and heart felt. I could feel your emotions. Who inspired you? ^^

Answer #2

I like it…its pretty

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