What do you guys think of this poem?

allow me 2 suggest you a little different poem .

v are friends.bt perhaps more thn frnds?, from your heart ask this. I ask nothing frm u, but only your love is what I wish. just like the sea is to the shores, I want 2 b always yours…

I got confused SORRY!

ok, for the person who said it sucks. read it over and over again. its obvious that he wants her back. he is trying. and loves her to bit. I would have tried this tho. I’ve loved you forever, I still love you today, We’ve been fighting for awhile, Why did it have to end today? I laughed and I cried, But atleast I tried, You’ll always be in my heart, But for now, You’ve tourn me apart.

By Kimberly Scott age 15

poem sucks. it started off ok but the end aint so good. if yall just broke up, let her have her space. stay close friends with her. if she doesn’t come back to you then it’s not meant to be. if she doesn’t come back to you in like 2 weeks, don’t waste your time on her. start searching for someone else. hell, if you do find someone else she might get jealous and want you back.

similar 2 yur other poem, is it the cut version? srry, not name suggestions and kaveri, that poem is beautiful

sorry bout that I’ve got to work on it a lil an no your not that harsh