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The darkness

this is a poem I rote when I used to be suicidal

Passion and desire Down the drain Please tell me what I have to gain

I can’t explain How much I won’t to die I tell my self to keep on going Please just try

To find myself alone, All I won’t to do is cry My blood is shed, And my tears run red

It drips down the drain, And relives my pain

Passion and desire Down the drain Please tell me what I have to gain

the invisible blood I’ve bled I swear there is no more to be shed. As I lay awake in a dream Listening to myself loudly scream

Don’t worry this will go away I will learn to love another day The darkness will depart New love will come and mend my heart My thoughts of suicide will slowly disappear Love and self esteem will soonly reappear.

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Answer #1

your a dumb sh#t its not about me wanting to die, its about over coming being suicidal. and I don’t no why they let stupid little 13 year olds on this sight. grow up. the people inlife that are always happy are so fake.

Answer #2

I cant relate to this poem so much, so its hard to give a fair opinion.

just a few spelling and punctuation mistakes:

“All I won’t to do is cry “

correct me if I am wrong, but isnt “won’t” an abbreviation for “will not”, I believe the word you are looking for is “want”. “I tell my self to keep on going “

“myself” is one word.

keep writing, its a good release :)

Answer #3

are you crazy you must be emo you emos always wanting to die there is no reason to live

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