How does this sound?

Guitar in hand It plays my heart’s tunes As here, in my bathroom, I stand Eyes closed All emotion flowing from my heart into my hand Then out of my guitar’s notes

Here I stand All emotion flowing Lost and confused My hurt is now showing

I say, ‘let it show’ And continue to write and play my guitar Out, my hurt does flow Onto the paper and from the guitar This is how I let my hurt go And soon by what people read They will know This is how I let it go

Answer #1

Not bad. I liked it :P

Answer #2

sorry :(

Answer #3

i like it (:

Answer #4

hMM not baD :)

Answer #5

I thought it was great!

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