what do you think of this rap i wrote im kinda new too rapping but i do it alot now?

love is like a prison that you just cant seem to escape but when the other person dont feel the same it seems like it turns to hate you wanna date but you cant theres something in the way so you do nothing but set there alone and greive all day more emotional than the gay i cant take another day of this heartbreak this cant be my fate in love with someone that dont feel the same ill never do this again you got me locked up and beat like an oldschool wrestling pin no where to go no love to show all i know all i know is i dont wanna do this no mo all we do is argue fuss and cuss till my heads feels like its bout too bust its not me or you its us havnt you had enough of this its getting rough and harder to move on but if you dont come to your senses your gonna look up and ill be gone

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Answer #1

lyrics are pretty good ) honest! for a beginer who’s starting to write.. it’s pretty decient! thing is.. idunno if you’re good at rapping it, if i can’t hear it! how you rap the words - the pace, beat, pronouncation.. all matters!

Answer #2

lyk butterfly said its good for a beginer i write raps nd dats pretty good i lyk it ull get better as the more you write X)

Answer #3

thanks i wrote another one ill post it up when i get off of vacation

Answer #4

Cool nd ur welcome

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