What do you think of my new lyrics?

(acoustic)

Im here without you honey its just me and time its not a friend of mine but dont think about the distance just give my song another listen close your eyes Im by your side where you are seems pretty far just look above and count the stars you know im doing the same what i love is what we became in the middle of the night we’ll be holding on tight and we’ll wish it never ends dont think about the distance just give my song another listen close your eyes I’m by your side I’ll see you in your dreams tonight

honesty is the best policy so what do you think?(:

Answer #1

I like it, I like the rhyme it has to it :) If anything, it could sound pretty good with a country rhythm! I’d give it a 10!

Answer #2

“what i love is what we became “ - fav. line this would be a hit imo.

Answer #3

thanks thats my fav line too :)

Answer #4

Time Is not a friend of mine either

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