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Does this paragrahy thing make sense?

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"A long, long time ago, there was an ancient sea. Over millions of years the sea dried up, leaving a huge length of cliffs in it's place! Humans named these cliffs The Niagara Escarpment, and today they are a very important part of our lives."...It sounds wrong to me but I cant figure out what's wrong with it xD