Need honest opinions for this love Poem "Always Be"

“Always be”

You know. I’m looking outside my bedroom window, its looking like it’s about to rain. The clouds are so menacing looking.

Life hasn’t been the same since you left. The weather over here seems to reflect my mood nearly perfectly over here the past few days. The sun hasn’t come out at all. Just rain. Some thunderstorms too.

I miss you so much… Since you left, I can’t help but think that something is missing from my day. I havent stopped crying yet and I can already feel my heart breaking down again. I didnt think your absence would affect me this much - and it’s only the beginning of this hardship.

I love you… with every fiber of my being I do. I’ve loved you since the start, and through every hardship that’ve we’ve fought, My Love for you has never faulted.

I Love you so much… and now that you’re gonna be gone soon, I know exactly whats wrong… I don’t give my heart to just anyone, but I did give it too you - and truth be told I don’t regret doing so.

I’d give up anything, just to have you here with me. You’re the only thing I’ve ever needed really…

I’ve grown to hate the Distance between us. Never knowing of our fates together. But even with that, only truths have been what I’ve put together. To name two, a truth about what I feel for you and a truth about my Loyalty to you.

What I feel is that I Love you with everything I have. And my loyalty to you has never faltered, though someone tried to halter that once. But I passed that test with flying colors.

I’ve always been loyal and true to you. I’ve sacrificed much just for us to be. I’d sacrifice it all again for you, because I love you more then the world to be.

I Love you. This will. Always be. The truth.

Answer #1

Aww thats so sweet, always listen to what your heart and mind is saying and put it down on paper and you can’t go wrong.

Answer #2

it like really good and I also right poetry its really good and so sweet.

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