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I want you close. but you seem so distant. I want to keep you near. but inside I have a fear. what if you dont like what you find? will I be the only one on your mind? I want to say I love you too. but im not sure if I truely do. I dont what your lie's the only thing you can say that I'll truely dispise. I want to be your one and only instead of being left feeling lonely.

      - midnight dreamer. 

what do you think? honest oppinions please. and I apologize for the spelling mistakes. spelling isnt one of my strongest subjects. and please if you see somthing that you think I could improve on (outher than my spelling) tell me. thanks everyone!