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MY ROOMS

Rooms, bleek and gray
Finding no purpose but to fill the deep waters that run from my eyes
That leaves empty spaces for fears and lies
Nor tomorrow or today
Shall I wash theese feelings away
For all of my tries
To escape it has ties
That pulls me down every single day
So in that room I lay
Rooms, bleek and gray