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MY ROOMS
Rooms, bleek and gray Finding no purpose but to fill the deep waters that run from my eyes That leaves empty spaces for fears and lies Nor tomorrow or today Shall I wash theese feelings away For all of my tries To escape it has ties That pulls me down every single day So in that room I lay Rooms, bleek and gray
DONT CHANGE IT!
its PERFECT!! just add a lil more punctuation
its awEsme! don't change 1ne thing :)
Very nice. I like it a lot.
I love it.
it sucks.
eh its ok
