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Come by my sorrows Forget my retched sins Lying beneath my tears My feelings left with in Staring at my ceiling Forgetting why I’m here Let my eye see forth Let my self die within See my dieing heart Feel my trembling hands Let me fall apart Drench my hands in blood Clench my ending dagger Driven threw my heart I lie beneath the starry night Waiting for the sun rise The one ill never see I see my life flash before me My last breath a struggled fight I close my eyes and think of you The days I thought I knew us But you only thought of you I set forth on my journey now But one last thing I ask of you When you find me lying here My face pale and my lips blue Take this dagger And know I did this for you
I LOVE it! I used to write poems like that but a friend of mine took them and I havent seen them since. And I'd probably get in trouble if I posted them on here...
come on guys I just want to know what you guys think please comment :)
Oh wow, I love it. Good job.
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