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Let me know what you think of my poem...
Okay so I’ve decided to try something new. I’ve never writen a poem before, but decided I wanted to give it a try. Let me know what you think. Remember this is my first one so please be kind. :)
Oh and I have no title for it LOL
Her liver is dying And inside she’s crying Every night it’s the same She’s drunk again Trying to numb the pain Working, cooking, and cleaning Is that all life will bring? Where’s her happiness Where’s her smile The one that her children adore She can see a glimpse of happiness But runs in fear of change Not sure if she’s strong enough To live that lonely life Should she live in certain agony? Or take that frightening chance?
that to me seemed like you put a lot of emotion in it or feeling which ever and I think that is what makes a good poem and poet very good I like it
I think for your frist time its very gOod… I like it!!! =]
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