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I'm not really sure if this one makes does to me. lol.

The Needer

You seem to think I've gone too far, But who were you to watch me char? I've made a promise to myself, to let you bleed and give no help. I'm sick of helping you, you foul. You never helped me, I'm your tool. I'll sit here dying, you won't care. You've found a new one to take care. Poor girl who fell under your spell. Will you let her out of that hell? She'll never love you after that. What will you do knowing that fact?