Do you agree with this poem?

This is my philosophy on love, in a poem. :) It’s based on a true story, haha. Also I tried putting it in the ‘Love and Relationships’ category but I think ‘Writing and Literature’ works better.

The Steve -well do you want to be more than friends? -yes. do you? -yes. -but it can’t be a relationship that sounds like work! -what else would it be? -friends with benefits? -but that’s just sex. don’t you want more? -oh. yes. what do we call it then? -steve -steve? what??? that’s so random! -I know.

a steve a relationship two or more people both know someday it will end. there is no fear of the future or the past, only a love for the present, enjoy the time they have right then right then it is enough and they will do wild and crazy things they will create a whole world of their own and when it is over they will not look back they will move forward with the memory and a smile.

Answer #1

like IT

Answer #2

That’s just my style of writing. -_- Not everyone has to like is.

Answer #3

I don’t agree that is a philosophy or a poem. Simply a collection of clunky dialogue and cliches.

Answer #4

The Steve © 2009 by myself and an ex boyfriend :)

Answer #5

I think this poem is th way relationships should be..the less worries about the end will bring happiness and carefree things to happen while they last..I would definitely love to have a relationship like that

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