okay so my "friend" wrote this and he said its cheezy. do you think it is?
with the glare of the sun hitting your eyes it looks as if you have beautiful shinning diamonds that leaves people speechless with desire and wonder.
I dont think it is cheesy at all! id love for a guy to say that about me! and it does sound more shakespearian then something wrote by poe.
its not cheesy, well maybe a little, but its got that old charm to it, so the cheesiness can fade away because of that.
edgar allan poe? what the fa naw more shakesparish poe was sinical shakespear was romantic
its not cheezy its like old style poeitry like edger allen poe
I think its cheesy..