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I am horrible with introductions because I never know what to say and just like to get straight to the point. What can I talk about or add to this opening paragraph?

"In the book Lord of the Flies by William Golding, there are a number of occurrences that foreshadow particular events in the story. The two main events of foreshadowing that stood out the most were Simon’s death and Piggy’s death."