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A unfaithful poem thingyy!! Lol what you think
“unfaithful mystery”
You say things will get better You say ull change But right now its hard to measure If I should suffer this pain
You say you understand You say you know But even as you hold my hand I know you dont
You say this love is ours You say forever it’ll last But do I really have the power To forget about the past
You say we’re meant to be That we should never part But it’s now I start to see You were never really there from the start
You say you love me You say you care But when I need you Youre never there
You say you need me To walk this earth But do you believe me When I say you hurt
Must I solve this mystery In which you portray Should I leave you Or should I stay
A decent try.
your good you should persue this and try to into like a club or something that writes poetry, because I think if you do that then you will only get better and if you get better you will be getting awards because this is so good you should write a book.
I think you did a wonderful job on this poem. I can relate to each stanza, in some form, in my past. It really sucks to have to be in that position. From my experience, I found that leaving made me happier. I’m not sure if this poem relates to how you feel, but I hope you find what you’re looking for.
Keep writing!
I love it! =) Good job!
Every poem you write makes me teary eyed there wonderfully sad
I think this is awsum I write song and poems there fun and I lk this 1 gd job xx
I really like this its good
its really good(: I like it
I give it a ten hehe.
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