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Would You Read This?

I have an idea for a story and I was wondering if you guys think it’d be worth actually writting it out.

Here it is: There’s this female vampire named Lyric, she’s from a long line of pure vampires so she has pressure to marry this guy name Jude, whose also a vampire. While Lyric is looking for someone to feed on she meets this guy named Benjamin, who is studying to be a minister at a church. For now, he’s just a bellringer. Lyrics thinks it’s cool that he ‘controls time’ and she hooks up with him.

Jude ends up getting really mad for some reason or another. Then he kills himself… somehow. Or he gets in some life-altering experience related to depression caused by rejection.

Jude’s sister hunt down Lyric and ends up killing Benjamins mentor, who is a pastor fromt he church. Then, Ben wants to get revenge so he asks Lyric to change him.

That’s all I have so far but tell me what you think!!

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Answer #1

I think it sounds interesting, you have a talent!! keep it up! :)

Answer #2

nah, not original… vampires are to boring and cliche now days… its really over done…

try write something from your own head, not from millions of other ppls…

use your talent for something better…

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