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Who can tell me about my poem?

Guess who loves you poem By me

They’re not their Because you are not that cute :-p You work out to c if only One will come round

There has to be somebody?…you ask yourself You have reasons to be more confident Because there is one around You just don’t look her way

You’ve seen her before Guess you have forgotten who she is She doesn’t only c u She wants to spend all her time with u

She can be anything you dream of Shell do anything for you to notice her If you would only see in front of u She would find a way to work it out

I’ve never written a poem without someones help. So tell me what you think about it plzzz

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Answer #1

=/

Answer #2

Its…ok

Answer #3

I’m going to be blunt. It sucks. Sorry honey.

Answer #4

Your poem tells me your a thoughtful and passionite person.However,it also represents a person you can’t think about.On a scale of one to ten - 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10. I give it a six,some rhyming would be good but all poems dont need to,then again practise on your sense!!

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