What should I do about my character?

I am writting a story and one of my chracters is’nt comeing out as planed :/ ( He is kinda one of those prince charming types but I made him sound like a pedo!>.<) Have any fun advice? XD

Answer #1

Can you provide examples?

It’s difficult to tell you how to fix something when we don’t know where it’s broken.

Answer #2

Hey girl, I luv writing books 2, hope 1 day they’ll be in shop windows :) anywayz, yeh, just, say that he’s a nice guy, doesn’t harm anybody, and…loves th cinderella type, and say that his matez call him prince charming, there you go, c you l8ter girl :) good luck.xx

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