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Sometime’s your face can say 100 words Sometime’s your lie’s tell me more than the truth Sometime’s the truth tell s me more than lie’s I was on your side even when you were wrong I was down when you were down I was sad when you were sad I was happy when you were happy What emotion can I be when you left? When you walked out that door and said “I’m never coming back “ I cried when you left Now I sleep alone I don’t get your warm hug’s I don’t get your soft kisses I don’t get your warming laugh anymore I get to be alone

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Answer #1

good, but personal opinion, change “I don’t get your warm hug’s I don’t get your soft kisses I don’t get your warming laugh anymore “

into “”I don’t get your warm hug’s I don’t get your soft kisses I don’t get your (not warm, something else ) laugh anymore “

Answer #2

I don’t get your hearty laugh anymore maybe? helping you out on irrissans comment lol. and I really like it by the way (: it’s sad. but usually the more emotional the poem it is, the better people can relate.

Answer #3

hahaha yeah I know (: it’s all good though lol

Answer #4

lol us three are like the only people that comment

Answer #5

Thank’s xxx :)

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