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Emotions after Emotions… Controlling them inside of me. I’m a girl in love. Love is one thing that overcomes me. My heart softens when I am in love. Risk is what you take when u’re in love. Tears stream down my face when I see him sad. But what can I do? I’m in love with u. Smile darling smile. Don’t be sad. For I am with u…day and night. I comfort you and make sure that u’ll be alright. you may not know how I feel, but its alright. All I want is to see you smile. Darling, just forget about her. you know you derserve better. Give others a chance to love you And you will find the love, that u’ve been longing for.

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Answer #1

awesome christel Emotions after Emotions… Controlling them inside of me Love is one thing that overcomes me. My heart softens when I am in love. Risk is what you take when u’re in love. Tears stream down my face when I see him sad. But what can I do? I’m in love with u. Smile darling smile. Don’t be sad. For I am with u…day and night. I comfort you and make sure that u’ll be alright. I love those parts the most

Answer #2

its a poem I can kinda relate to its good but love and tear you down and others to so look at what your doin and if its meant to be you will be in love together the part where you said something about another girl if he really has those feelings for you then I think you cant stop love

Answer #3

niceee

Answer #4

-> <-< -claps- Good job

Answer #5

I love it

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