What do you think of the poem named Box?

Late night eyes, Burn with the hours. In search for something new, Lost in the cold nature showers.

Clawing at the chilled window, Tears leave marks of pain. Feelings of hopelessness, Come down with the rain.

Heavy feet pace slowly, The timely night grows old. Drops of blood and hate, Splatter a knife so cold.

One day dead trees of sorrow, And lonely hearts of grey, Will find the peace and balance, Welcoming life to stay.

Answer #1

This is really deep and I really like it.

Answer #2

how about this:

a secret is held in this box it contents, quite unorthodox but there is no doubt you’ll never find out for its kept closed by chains and by locks

Answer #3

I love this, Its so deep, and it makes you think about what the true meaning of it is. Im not too sure about the name though.. Maybe like ‘Trapped in my Own Box’ or ‘Lost in my own life’, something like that, I dunno, Lol.

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