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What do you think of my poem?
Torn
Between two worlds my eyes open up
One has strength
And one has love
I am torn
I want to leave my world
Fall slip tumble into another
Forget my past and how its abused me
Screw lovers they always refuse me
I try to piece back together my broken heart
But whatever I do it just falls apart
Love and hate together as one
Im falling
Im slipping
I think im done
Forget the past
It doesn’t matter
I have to warn you
It isn’t pretty
Being torn is such a pity
Decisions are tough
Life can be rough
So forget pain
Forget life
Forget love
The solution to this problem is at the end of a knife
It tears me apart that you are gone
Found inner strength and had moved on
But just like life
Love is easily taken away
So I breathe my last breath with only one thing to say
Don’t deny love
Even if it hurts you
Because I would rather feel pain
Then the emptiness of a cold bitter heart
No I lay here
My heart is being fixed
No longer shattered
Or tangled
Or torn
its amzin’ easy 2 read!!! because its all split up!!! I like it!!!
I like it its good I cant write poetry…I want to but what ever I do it dont work out. lol!
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