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Im fifteen and I wrote this poem about my great grandma that died at 90 years old..id love to have some input on it. its called "Nanny's Hidden Heart"
soft feeble hands, so weak and trembling. 90 years of memories, Each turned into wrinklies, loved ones all remembering. Stubborn and bitter always preaching thoughts of the world today, "Unbelievable and Rotten" Her exact words, Every Saturday morning Before all of us went out to play. Oreos always hidden, along with her favorite icecream bars, saved for us kids, Along with her heart. Surprising us with her unexpected depart. Never appreciated her quite enough Until that day that was more than rough November 2, 2008 The day I lost my nanny to old, old age. Ill never forget her, her hands, wrinkles, hidden heart pictures that are never left in the dark her glass angel still hangs on my wall to remind me, Nanny's still there loving and confiding in us all.
I wrote it.. please dont take it
Wow, this is amazing. Very sweet:)
Your an awesome writer:)
awww I thinks its good your amazing writer that is so sad
very sweet ^_^ I think she 'ld really appreciate it
I think it's cute
Beautiful
