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What do you think of my poem?

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I need to know what you think of my poem I need all the criticism I can get so I am to improve.hope you like it. And plez forgive spelling.

-end it quick- It runs throw me It runs throw you But in the end it will come out of us both Try to deny The truth is you die I die We all die Try and stop the enviable And it comes faster
So do me a favor and end it quick.