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Book exerpt we sit in the back of the truck. Me and my boyfriend,nathan the fireworks explode and fall on showers of sprinkles.we hold hands and kiss. Good thing my aparment is upstairs of nathans truck. And best of all nathan is my down neighbor.we kiss more basically choking on each others mouth.”kara” my mother calls. I groan.” see you babe” nathan says. I nod and kiss him. As I enter the house my mom is standing hands on hips. “well “ she begins. I sigh inpatiantly.”well is time we talked. You see I arranged your marriage to a guy your age. He lives in greece and no you are not marrying him your marrying his son. “mom I already have a boyfriend and I am not interested” I say.”yes but this tradition is centuries old and well… I am doing this for your good you will thank me one day”. “well thanks for ruining my life and and I hate you”! I see hurt seeping on her eyes. It hurts her I storm to my room and burst into tears what will happen to kara? How will she handle this situation? Find out next chapter! I will keep writing if you like it. If you do or I dont get comments I will. And if I dont I will stop see ya!