what do you think of this poem?

Those days

I never thought love could hurt so much, but you did throw the last punch.

what you said sent me falling, forever crawling.

why am I forsaken now, forever rembering that simple vow.

did you forget about those days when you said "I love you"

sorry I cant really spell that good but just want to know what you think

Answer #1

woah I think thats really good =] kinda sad but really good! I definatly could not sit and think of somthing like that haha
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Answer #2

haha yea this poem is based off of what has happend in my life recently
Answer #3

I like this remindes me of my ex..but hey were back together now..
Answer #4

thats very good I can relate to this poem!! I liked it!!
Answer #5

wow. thats deep & simple at the same time. good job
Answer #6

amazing gift you have there
Answer #7

Aww thats really good
Answer #8

Great poem :)
Answer #9

I like it!
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