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What do you think of my poem?
I call it one day…it felt so good to take this negative feelings and create somethng positive..what do you think?
One day I pray to lose control
Dont wanna be coherent
Just wanna crawl into my hole
Dont wanna hear it
Give me my crutch so I can stand
Im nobodys role model
Everything tastes so bland
And I love the way you coddle
One day I plan to stand on my own
Just not tomorrow
One day ill show you how I've grown
You wont be so full of sorrow
Tell me that youve had enough
One day I plan to listen
I know youve had it rough
It wasnt my intention
Youre voice ringing though my head
Burns my brain like fire
I remember everything that you once said
And I proceed to get higher
awesome. :)
It would be better if you use proper English rather than slang.
thts some really good stuf there
thats awesome (: , I like it.
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